Advanced Graphic Design class at New England Institute of Art offers feedback to students via instructor and students.
Monday, December 12, 2016
So I’m posting revisions of what I have at the moment,
apparently I lost the .psd file for my third ad so I’m working on making a new
one now. I do however have my other 2 ads and fixed some of the more minor
things. Let me know what you think!
Emett, these are looking really good! I really love how the colors match so nicely together in the second one, and very vibrant too. The colors, especially the orange, is also accentuated in the first one with the city setting. I think this one was a good choice to bring to the vertical (iPhone) layout. In the second one I like how we get a feel of a 'dangerous' scenery and we see the cyberdog is the guidance for the person that we can see from the leg. I'm wondering if there is some way you could do that same type of effect with the city setting. Maybe add a person in that one as well? Or that red and white cane that assist the blind? It's just an idea, but I'm trying to see how we can also show that it is not only drastically different from a real dog, but it is also a service dog. These are coming along great!
Emett, these are looking really good! I really love how the colors match so nicely together in the second one, and very vibrant too. The colors, especially the orange, is also accentuated in the first one with the city setting. I think this one was a good choice to bring to the vertical (iPhone) layout. In the second one I like how we get a feel of a 'dangerous' scenery and we see the cyberdog is the guidance for the person that we can see from the leg. I'm wondering if there is some way you could do that same type of effect with the city setting. Maybe add a person in that one as well? Or that red and white cane that assist the blind? It's just an idea, but I'm trying to see how we can also show that it is not only drastically different from a real dog, but it is also a service dog. These are coming along great!
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