Heres The revised mission statement you required for. I think making the statement shorter should give a strong idea to user's on how they would react after managing their daily needs.
As far the branding goes, I remembered your critique last Thursday about making approach 1 and 4 Black and Red, for those colors are dominant.
Core Fitter
Core Fit’s purpose is to help manage eating habits
to provide a healthier lifestyle to users. The device would scan the user’s
body to register nutritional intake. Taking food allergies into account, it
will recommend foods to fit healthy daily needs. The device will also provide
digital summaries of the user’s daily progress,
without the use of medical injections.
Part of the goal of Core Fit is to streamline the
dietary process, providing fewer steps than its competition to access essential
information. The idea is to provide nothing unnecessary to prevent confusion in
this overwhelmingly complex world of diet and nutrition. Core Fitter can even
recommend cooking tips and food brands.
The target audience for Core Fit is primarily young
adults aged 18 to 35 who work full time.
My
direct advertisement will be:
1. Personal emails
2. Billboards
3. Magazines
4. Web Ads
Brand Identity
These arnt the colors i'll be picking for my real color palette for I was experimenting with the concepts only. I think Number 12 from the sketch looks pretty convenient to my opinion.

Well written brief - clear and concise, giving us some good reasonings behind this new product.
ReplyDeleteLogo - We spoke in class about using one of your favorites, #2, and reworking it to include the interesting "O" in CORE from #1. Making this a bold as you can (since it will be seen in your ads on the screen of your 3 devices) would be a good idea. Think about using a bolder version for "FIT". Also, think high energy colors (red is good, orange too) because you are selling to a high energy athletic group of people.
This has the potential to be a strong yet simple logo, very appropriate for the use on those device screens. Nice.